Alternative ending
June 19, 2008
Olivia:
When Olivia left the hospital she felt relieved and much better about her situation. Everything was clarified now. Douglas knew about her affair with the Nawab because Dr. Saunders blew her cover about a miscarriage. So she had to tell Douglas. Because of that it was impossible for her to stay with him and as a result of that she could go to the Nawab. She really did not have a guilty conscience because after the abortion everything which could make her think of Douglas had gone. She was free, free for a new love and a new interesting life. After arriving at the Nawabs’s palace, her illusions were destroyed. The Nawab was sure of her now and he could treat her like he wanted to. Olivia occupied the third (and not the first!) rang in his life. The most important person for him was his mother, the old Begum. Also more important than Olivia was Sandy, his wife. Crucial for his decision was the Begum, and for her it was not of any importance how her son looked like or how he earned his money. So after getting Olivia, he got more and more careless with himself. He did not care for Olivia and got very unattractive (not to mention fat). So Oliva felt neglected and envied the Begum and Sandy. There was only one solucion for her problem she thought..
A few years later, Olivia and the Nawab being very attractive after a diet again lived together in the mountains with a lot of children. Everyday was good because of being together. Their life was perfect expect for the fact that the Nawab’s beloved mother served time in prison. He never came to know that Olivia attributes some jewelleries falsely to the Begum to purport that she stole these. And Sandy, she never returned after a journey to Satipur where Olivia stayed accidentally, too. She has been missing until now.
August 25, 2008 at 3:34 am
Surprisingly this is a lot better than the original ending. Good Job.